tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post1025625785006937999..comments2023-09-28T17:03:59.428+05:30Comments on बिखरे मोती: चांदनी की सड़कसंगीता स्वरुप ( गीत )http://www.blogger.com/profile/18232011429396479154noreply@blogger.comBlogger66125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-66175471533133373282010-07-16T13:13:49.090+05:302010-07-16T13:13:49.090+05:30adbhut rachna.adbhut rachna.VIVEK VK JAINhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15128320767768008022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-74228295206949822872010-07-15T17:45:42.132+05:302010-07-15T17:45:42.132+05:30इतनी सुन्दर छोटी रचनायें मैंने पहले कभी नहीं पढी। ...इतनी सुन्दर छोटी रचनायें मैंने पहले कभी नहीं पढी। बधाईѕнαιя ∂я. ѕαηנαу ∂αηιhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05121772506788619980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-46268121694140334522010-07-13T22:38:50.975+05:302010-07-13T22:38:50.975+05:30संगीता स्वरुप जी...
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- vijay tiwari ki...संगीता स्वरुप जी...<br />भावपूर्ण ...<br />- vijay tiwari kislayविजय तिवारी " किसलय "https://www.blogger.com/profile/14892334297524350346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-33556374726315296952010-07-13T20:18:15.377+05:302010-07-13T20:18:15.377+05:30kabhi kabhi chadani bhi tej dhoop see jhulsane val...kabhi kabhi chadani bhi tej dhoop see jhulsane vali hoti hai. ye anubhuti to manodasha par nirbhar karati hai. bahut sundar likha hai.रेखा श्रीवास्तवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00465358651648277978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-84615925630551348232010-07-12T19:42:15.098+05:302010-07-12T19:42:15.098+05:30मैं तो यह सोच-सोचकर हैरान हूँ -
"चाँदनी से ...<b>मैं तो यह सोच-सोचकर हैरान हूँ - <br /><br />"चाँदनी से निर्मित पथ पर चलने के बाद भी <br />जिसके पैरों में छाले पड़ गए, <br />उसके पैर कितने नाज़ुक होंगे!"</b>रावेंद्रकुमार रविhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15333328856904291371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-2736337355689978672010-07-12T10:21:27.217+05:302010-07-12T10:21:27.217+05:30लाजवाब अभिव्यक्ति ......बहुत खूबलाजवाब अभिव्यक्ति ......बहुत खूबDevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05009376638678868909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-16168753105467445592010-07-12T01:07:24.392+05:302010-07-12T01:07:24.392+05:30अरे वाह!! कमाल है!!अरे वाह!! कमाल है!!वन्दना अवस्थी दुबेhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048830323802336861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-63513768142769562732010-07-11T20:21:12.882+05:302010-07-11T20:21:12.882+05:30सुन्दर भावाभिव्यक्ति है।सुन्दर भावाभिव्यक्ति है।हर्षिताhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04799029469213410208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-32016332620807977722010-07-11T17:36:58.333+05:302010-07-11T17:36:58.333+05:30चाँद को चकोर यूँ ही प्यार करता है , चुपके चुपके । ...चाँद को चकोर यूँ ही प्यार करता है , चुपके चुपके । सुन्दर रचना शिखा जी ।डॉ टी एस दरालhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16674553361981740487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-77581280617448605072010-07-10T22:50:35.187+05:302010-07-10T22:50:35.187+05:30bahut sunder...badhai..bahut sunder...badhai..चैन सिंह शेखावतhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18079689283863767097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-5249212024117099032010-07-10T17:44:33.716+05:302010-07-10T17:44:33.716+05:30गागर में सागर....
वाह क्या बात है.....गागर में सागर....<br />वाह क्या बात है.....त्रिवेणीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18065125611157155281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-35221007768073403272010-07-10T14:57:19.360+05:302010-07-10T14:57:19.360+05:30Bahut gehri baat keh di aapne.Bahut gehri baat keh di aapne.ZEALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04046257625059781313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-1689096851513998332010-07-09T21:42:58.909+05:302010-07-09T21:42:58.909+05:30चाँद शब्दों में हीआपने बहुत ही गहरी बात कही है ......चाँद शब्दों में हीआपने बहुत ही गहरी बात कही है .......Kusum Thakurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02345756853367472461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-69979103867330948172010-07-09T19:31:04.682+05:302010-07-09T19:31:04.682+05:30sangeeta ji ..Pahli baar aapke blog par aaya. Padh...sangeeta ji ..Pahli baar aapke blog par aaya. Padha to lagaa ki aana safal ho gaya. Aapki bhavpoorn rachnaaye dil ko chhu lene vaali hain.वीरेंद्र सिंहhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17461991763603646384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-18813250851321052742010-07-09T15:38:52.322+05:302010-07-09T15:38:52.322+05:30क्या कह दिया आपने - कमाल हैक्या कह दिया आपने - कमाल हैAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-21022724468728315542010-07-09T14:34:46.096+05:302010-07-09T14:34:46.096+05:30har bar ki tarah phir se ek lazbab nazm...har bar ki tarah phir se ek lazbab nazm...स्वातिhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06459978590118769827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-10115261444585945872010-07-09T13:48:10.827+05:302010-07-09T13:48:10.827+05:30इतने थोड़े लफ़्ज़ों में बड़ी ही जान लिए नज़्म पढने को...इतने थोड़े लफ़्ज़ों में बड़ी ही जान लिए नज़्म पढने को मिली.<br /> शाहिद "अजनबी"Nai Kalamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05273880081106940510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-16492912764114539932010-07-08T23:29:49.343+05:302010-07-08T23:29:49.343+05:30you are really amazing,
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yun hi likhte rahein......bahut hi gehri rachna.....<br />yun hi likhte rahein...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-55891629345530793622010-07-08T18:49:00.754+05:302010-07-08T18:49:00.754+05:30सड़क पर
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ख्वाहिश...सड़क पर<br /><br /><br />पाँव रख<br /><br /><br />चाँद पाने की<br /><br /><br />मैंने<br /><br /><br />ख्वाहिश की <br />वाह इन्सान भी कितनी बडी बडी ख्वाहिशें सजा लेता है<br /> लाजवाब। बधाईनिर्मला कपिलाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11155122415530356473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-14028851050701489452010-07-08T16:19:18.341+05:302010-07-08T16:19:18.341+05:30अक्सर नींद खुलते ही सपनो का सपना होना जान पड़ता है...अक्सर नींद खुलते ही सपनो का सपना होना जान पड़ता हैं ,पर चांदनी की सड़क वाकई कितनी खुबसूरत होगी इसकी मैं अब भी कल्पना ही कर रही हूँ,सुंदर लेखनRADHIKAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00417975651003884913noreply@blogger.com