tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post694004811557887400..comments2023-09-28T17:03:59.428+05:30Comments on बिखरे मोती: मौन का तालासंगीता स्वरुप ( गीत )http://www.blogger.com/profile/18232011429396479154noreply@blogger.comBlogger65125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-33880114721626536332010-07-20T05:32:50.235+05:302010-07-20T05:32:50.235+05:30संगीता जी
आज आपकी कवितायेँ पढ़ी बहुत अच्छा लगा
म...संगीता जी<br /> आज आपकी कवितायेँ पढ़ी बहुत अच्छा लगा<br />मैं पता नहीं कहाँ गुम था अब आप लोग मिले हैं<br /> तो बहुत दूर जाने की सोचता हूँAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00869289113422824430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-116925724126659272010-07-15T17:53:21.499+05:302010-07-15T17:53:21.499+05:30मौन का ताला। का कोई जवाब नहीं है।मौन का ताला। का कोई जवाब नहीं है।ѕнαιя ∂я. ѕαηנαу ∂αηιhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05121772506788619980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-20033206176170754012010-06-15T00:42:10.951+05:302010-06-15T00:42:10.951+05:30पर वहाँ एक
मौन का
ताला जड़ा था
ati uttam ,sundarपर वहाँ एक<br />मौन का<br />ताला जड़ा था <br />ati uttam ,sundarज्योति सिंहhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092900119898490662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-90156440327357284962010-06-14T17:11:07.506+05:302010-06-14T17:11:07.506+05:30...बहुत सुन्दर ... अदभुत भाव,बधाई!!!...बहुत सुन्दर ... अदभुत भाव,बधाई!!!कडुवासचhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04229134308922311914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-13315397413763743522010-06-14T14:34:21.336+05:302010-06-14T14:34:21.336+05:30कविता नही आप्त है ।कविता नही आप्त है ।अरुणेश मिश्रhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14110290381536011014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-81021249721651064032010-06-14T14:26:30.210+05:302010-06-14T14:26:30.210+05:30बहुत ही बढ़ियाबहुत ही बढ़ियाAmit Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15265175549736056144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-22150625266984176632010-06-13T11:09:31.211+05:302010-06-13T11:09:31.211+05:30प्रभावशाली....
पर वहाँ एक
मौन का
ताला जड़ा था ....प्रभावशाली....<br /><br />पर वहाँ एक <br />मौन का <br />ताला जड़ा था ..<br />बढ़िया भाव..Shabad shabad https://www.blogger.com/profile/09078423307831456810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-62039529266720780962010-06-12T12:46:46.010+05:302010-06-12T12:46:46.010+05:30दिल की कशमकश को बहुत सलीके से प्रस्तुत किया है। शु...दिल की कशमकश को बहुत सलीके से प्रस्तुत किया है। शुभकामनायेंनिर्मला कपिलाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11155122415530356473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-91325911980671545592010-06-12T12:05:09.304+05:302010-06-12T12:05:09.304+05:30Badha khatanaak tala lagaya aapne ....ab bole to b...Badha khatanaak tala lagaya aapne ....ab bole to bole kaise? Ligiye..tod diya hamne :-)प्रियाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04663779807108466146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-85182656675212300732010-06-12T08:00:43.988+05:302010-06-12T08:00:43.988+05:30बहुत सुंदर और प्रभावशाली
सुंदर रचना के लिए बधाईबहुत सुंदर और प्रभावशाली<br />सुंदर रचना के लिए बधाईआदेश कुमार पंकजhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09800781193845173200noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-37028805296998962852010-06-12T07:17:01.836+05:302010-06-12T07:17:01.836+05:30Bahut sundar aur bhavpoorna---.Bahut sundar aur bhavpoorna---.पूनम श्रीवास्तवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09864127183201263925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-14383088540601117092010-06-11T17:19:59.864+05:302010-06-11T17:19:59.864+05:30bahoot khoob. kya kahne, sundar kavita.bahoot khoob. kya kahne, sundar kavita.पंकज मिश्राhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05619749578471029423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-1263214211936981752010-06-11T15:02:18.225+05:302010-06-11T15:02:18.225+05:30गहरे भाव लिये हुये बेहतरीन अभिव्यक्ति ।गहरे भाव लिये हुये बेहतरीन अभिव्यक्ति ।सदाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10937633163616873911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-38169257026400220592010-06-11T14:17:32.607+05:302010-06-11T14:17:32.607+05:30dil main gehre utarte shabd.dil main gehre utarte shabd.sheetalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01268674674430026387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-62531580018771322572010-06-11T09:18:29.873+05:302010-06-11T09:18:29.873+05:30kya kahun.......der se aaya iske liye maafee?
gha...kya kahun.......der se aaya iske liye maafee?<br /><br />ghar par hun to jara kam aata hun.....<br /><br />aur main to jad hun.tale ki maanind :)Avinash Chandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01556980533767425818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-64034476552990092032010-06-11T07:13:41.020+05:302010-06-11T07:13:41.020+05:30बहुत सुंदरबहुत सुंदरआदेश कुमार पंकजhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09800781193845173200noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-35343648541859780552010-06-10T21:54:26.560+05:302010-06-10T21:54:26.560+05:30like always ..small and effective!!like always ..small and effective!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10650707738066429883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-76625036906905307542010-06-10T20:50:19.592+05:302010-06-10T20:50:19.592+05:30Waaaaaaaaaaah ! Mumma..shandaar tala maara hai...b...Waaaaaaaaaaah ! Mumma..shandaar tala maara hai...bahut achhi lagi yeh nazm...:):)Taruhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08735748897257922027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-42177388935525100762010-06-10T18:34:48.350+05:302010-06-10T18:34:48.350+05:30waah..masi jaan..
bahut khoobsurat rachna.waah..masi jaan..<br />bahut khoobsurat rachna.दिपाली "आब"https://www.blogger.com/profile/18338304714938415394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-84282329520030149712010-06-10T17:06:20.038+05:302010-06-10T17:06:20.038+05:30न जाने कितने महाकाव्यों का प्रेरणास्रोत है यह ताला...न जाने कितने महाकाव्यों का प्रेरणास्रोत है यह ताला...<br />--------<br /><a href="http://za.samwaad.com/" rel="nofollow">ब्लॉगवाणी माहौल खराब कर रहा है?</a>Dr. Zakir Ali Rajnishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03629318327237916782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-5459203842014719252010-06-10T16:03:39.243+05:302010-06-10T16:03:39.243+05:30गज़ब!! क्या बात है!! क्या अंदाज़ है.बहुब खूब!गज़ब!! क्या बात है!! क्या अंदाज़ है.बहुब खूब!شہروزhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02215125834694758270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-61893950133382768552010-06-10T13:28:41.334+05:302010-06-10T13:28:41.334+05:30sangeeta ji,
aapki rachna padhi, aur anyaas sochne...sangeeta ji,<br />aapki rachna padhi, aur anyaas sochne lagi ki ye maun ka taala aksar hamare hin hisse kyun aata? kyun hamare khyaal kisi keliye khule rahte jabki hamein koi khayalon mein bhi na sochta?<br />bas aise hin aapki kavita padhi aur jo mann mein aaya likh gai. bahut gahri kavita hai, mann mein ek tees see de gai. bahut bahut badhai sweekaren.डॉ. जेन्नी शबनमhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11843520274673861886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-47367122156147703562010-06-10T13:24:33.339+05:302010-06-10T13:24:33.339+05:30सच है प्रेम की भाषा से ये मौन खुल सकता है ... अच्छ...सच है प्रेम की भाषा से ये मौन खुल सकता है ... अच्छा लिखा है ....दिगम्बर नासवाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11793607017463281505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-88346182710994759672010-06-10T11:09:10.814+05:302010-06-10T11:09:10.814+05:30बहुत सुंदर भाव लिए कविता |बधाई ,
आशाबहुत सुंदर भाव लिए कविता |बधाई ,<br />आशाAsha Lata Saxenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16407569651427462917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341462548226287838.post-8288907149754937082010-06-09T22:05:09.141+05:302010-06-09T22:05:09.141+05:30kamaal ki kashish
shabdon ka samoocha arth nich...kamaal ki kashish <br /><br />shabdon ka samoocha arth nichod lene ka fun sab ke pas nahin hota sangeeta ji !<br /><br />maa shaarde ne aapko baksha hai ye kripa hai maa ki <br /><br />aapki jai ho......<br /><br />pasand************Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09116344520105703759noreply@blogger.com